# Sentences #permanentnote ## Source - [[training - Ninja writing]] ## Keywords (topics and howto) - [[topic - communicate effectively]] - [[how to be a better writer]] - [[how to be a better communicator]] ## Relevant notes - [[zt - paragraphs are the unit of attention]] ## Notes ### Tips to improve sentences - write to your grandma; she is smart but not on top of the latest in your area of expertise. ### Do - make the sentence short - make the sentence immediate, getting to the point quickly - add people instead of having dry theoretical sentences - use punctuation to add some rhythm and structure. - use poetic sentences to add rhythm - use the power of three when using lists - stick to what is necessary: how much does your audience care about what you are writing - bring drama by focusing on actions and emotions. ### Don’t do - Do not loose the sense of direction. Organise things that are connected together, for example all the positive and then all the negative - avoid back-referencing - avoid using "former" and "later"